GREEN   436   0
   3622 19.13 KB    278

[MMP] Xibalba's sacrifice

By BtMess
Created: 2021-07-16 21:31:33
Updated: 2021-01-31 23:14:02
Expiry: Never
anonoc/mmp/macromy massive pony

  1. 1.
    Original paste date: Jan 15th, 2019
  2. 2.
     
  3. 3.
    >Earthquakes announce that your time has come
  4. 4.
    >Every 100 years or so, this great being comes by your village
  5. 5.
    >And every time your tribe prepares her a sacrifice, so the peace may be kept intact for all
  6. 6.
    >Xibalba, how your tribe named her, never wandered close, so all you've known until now was her earth-shaking steps
  7. 7.
    >That and how no one ever came back from the ritual, even the warriors
  8. 8.
    >Warriors who were supposed to be the three best warriors or the current generation
  9. 9.
    >The biggest and strongest warriors of the tribe
  10. 10.
    >The three warriors who accompanied you by your sides and back
  11. 11.
    >Minding your steps so they don't think you're slowing down, you look at the ones by your side
  12. 12.
    >You can see how they're also afraid, knowing that no one ever came back
  13. 13.
    >Even though you're the sacrifice, you can only wonder what s in it for them
  14. 14.
    >"Less staring, more walking"
  15. 15.
    >The one in the back says, pushing you forward
  16. 16.
    "Right, right, sorry"
  17. 17.
    >But shortly after, the tremors stopped
  18. 18.
    >You're late
  19. 19.
    >Still walking through the dense forest, you can't make up what's to come
  20. 20.
    >Only thing you can see in the temple coming up far ahead
  21. 21.
    >"Hmm, I guess I arrived first for once, maybe I will wait a bit"
  22. 22.
    >Shock envelops you as you hear the booming girl voice and you stop waking
  23. 23.
    >Since you weren't pushed around, you can say the warriors had the same reaction
  24. 24.
    >"G-get it together guys, we're the best, just remember the training"
  25. 25.
    >"HOI" - the other two shout, grabbing you by the legs and arms
  26. 26.
    >They start sprinting, the third one going ahead and opening the way for the two warriors with you
  27. 27.
    >Soon enough the forest opens up and a quick jog gets you to the temple stairs
  28. 28.
    >No one is allowed here but the ones who will partake in the sacrifice
  29. 29.
    >So you had no idea it would be this big
  30. 30.
    >No, big is an understatement
  31. 31.
    >Before long you're being carried upstairs
  32. 32.
    >They start slowing down after the first hundred steps or so, and slow down their pace
  33. 33.
    >It only helps to show how large this thing really is, not even having gone up half or perhaps even a third of the way
  34. 34.
    >There s no way you d be able to climb all this in one go
  35. 35.
    >Perhaps that s what they meant with the training, already expecting the need to carry you up
  36. 36.
    >But you guys are late
  37. 37.
    >And as you climb the last set of stairs a massive plumage shows itself above
  38. 38.
    >What kind of bird would even have blue-ish feathers that big
  39. 39.
    >Slowing down to get their breath and not look weak, the warriors finally put you down
  40. 40.
    >After a single deep breath you four get back to walking, revealing something as big as an elephant skull tying the headdress together
  41. 41.
    >Probably bigger than an elephant skull, as it didn't look like anything...
  42. 42.
    >The first green hairs from her head finally show up
  43. 43.
    >Which is quickly followed by the yellow fur of her face
  44. 44.
    >Her eyes are closed and apparently she doesn't notice your approach, remaining still
  45. 45.
    >Finishing the climb, you have no other words to describe this gigantic horse being besides beautiful
  46. 46.
    >Also huge and heavy, with how the simple act of her laying her head down has cracked the structure slightly
  47. 47.
    >But that wouldn't be good to say to the being you were supposed to be a sacrifice to
  48. 48.
    >The three warriors step in front of you, before hitting the back of their spears on the floor with all their strength
  49. 49.
    >The knock makes the mare snap her eyes open and raise her head swiftly, looking even more massive now
  50. 50.
    >You're level with the bottom of her chest fluff when she finally stops and looks down
  51. 51.
    >"Oh, you've arrived, hello~"
  52. 52.
    >You could notice she was whispering, comparing to what you heard before
  53. 53.
    >Yet her voice still arrived like thunder
  54. 54.
    >All three warriors knelt down, before the middle one spoke up
  55. 55.
    >"We've brought the sacrifice, may our peace reign for 100 years more..."
  56. 56.
    >You see her hoof raising slowly as he spoke, waiting for him to finish
  57. 57.
    >Yet, he stopped talking, all of you four frozen in fear from it
  58. 58.
    >It could easily kill all you four at once if she decided to lower on you
  59. 59.
    >Instead, it lowered on the side, not aiming at any of you
  60. 60.
    >"You're late"
  61. 61.
    >She said, not whispered, actually speaking out loud while hitting the top of the temple on the side
  62. 62.
    >It was more of a tap than actually hitting it, but it shook it enough to finally bring you to your knees
  63. 63.
    >"And the sacrifice didn't show proper respect until I made it do it myself"
  64. 64.
    >You were supposed to kneel too!?
  65. 65.
    >No one said anything
  66. 66.
    >Her booming voice and irritation made you tremble in fear
  67. 67.
    >"Perhaps I should give a personal visit to the village to teach you all some manners"
  68. 68.
    >At that, the first warrior managed to bring himself back enough to plead
  69. 69.
    >"No! Mistress please, don't destroy our village for our mistakes"
  70. 70.
    >"Hmph, come forward"
  71. 71.
    >Audibly gulping, he got up and walked forward, past the sacrifice spot and to the other side
  72. 72.
    >"So you want my mercy? Fine"
  73. 73.
    >Her other hoof that was on the ground started to rise and, filled with fear, he turned around to get some distance
  74. 74.
    >The hoof that was planted on the temple shook it violently in reaction
  75. 75.
    >The three of you who were knelt down fell to your sides and he fell on his face
  76. 76.
    >"Don't you dare run, did you not want my forgiveness?"
  77. 77.
    >All of you stood still, her piercing gaze coming from the skies
  78. 78.
    >"DO YOU WANT IT?"
  79. 79.
    >"Y-y-yes"
  80. 80.
    >"Then get up"
  81. 81.
    >Slowly he stood up, but neither of you three dared to move
  82. 82.
    >Her other hoof slowly lowered on him, prompting him to put his hands up to hold it back
  83. 83.
    >It was like he was trying to hold back an entire building, larger than the biggest one back home
  84. 84.
    >As soon as both his hands touched the underside of her hoof it stopped
  85. 85.
    >"There, if you can hold the weight and duration of my ire I will forgive you"
  86. 86.
    >Immediatelly his legs and arms stiffed up, as if holding back some inhumane weight
  87. 87.
    >Looking up you could see the mare smirk
  88. 88.
    >Staring back down, you watched the bizarre sight of the tiny ant holding the finger back
  89. 89.
    >Or what was the closest thing you could compare it to
  90. 90.
    >It tilted left and right slightly, the warrior trembling underneath it
  91. 91.
    >"Okay that s enough, who s the next warrior"
  92. 92.
    >It was so quick you barely even saw it
  93. 93.
    >One moment the warrior, who opened the way for you three, was holding up to his life
  94. 94.
    >The next was like the sky itself had fallen on him
  95. 95.
    >The ground shook when the whole weight of her hoof finally was fully released and fell, you now staring at it
  96. 96.
    >"Do I have to repeat myself?"
  97. 97.
    >This is madness
  98. 98.
    >Like you, none of them dared to move out of fear
  99. 99.
    >"I was expecting more from "the best warriors of this generation"..."
  100. 100.
    >"But I guess it can't be helped with these manners of yours"
  101. 101.
    >At that she got up, her hooves leaving the temple and hitting the ground softly with a loud thud
  102. 102.
    >Only now you realized that she was sitting down as if at a table
  103. 103.
    >Wait, the previous threat of hers and now getting up to leave
  104. 104.
    >"So be it"
  105. 105.
    >As she started to turn for her first step you got up to your knees and screamed
  106. 106.
    "Wait!"
  107. 107.
    >You don't know what you expected, but she actually stopped
  108. 108.
    >Turning around and seeing you, she raised one of her eyebrows
  109. 109.
    >But not long after she smiled, seeing how you were on your knees and not in the same outfit as the warriors
  110. 110.
    >Having the undivided attention of the gargantuan mare actually shook your bones, and you had to rely on your hands to stay above the ground
  111. 111.
    >"Well? Speak up human, I don't have all day"
  112. 112.
    "I-I came here ready to give my life for the village, please give me a chance"
  113. 113.
    >"Oh?" - she said, sitting back down and shaking the earth once more
  114. 114.
    >Slowly she lowered her head down
  115. 115.
    >"I don't know, you were late and didn't even had the manners to kneel, how do you think you're fit to die for your village?"
  116. 116.
    "I..."
  117. 117.
    >"You...?"
  118. 118.
    "I'm..."
  119. 119.
    >Her right hoof rose to the edge, and you were reminded of the other dude
  120. 120.
    >You're too far gone to stop
  121. 121.
    >And you knew what you were signing up to
  122. 122.
    "I'm not, but even late and with mistakes I'd like to have a chance"
  123. 123.
    >Your whole body vibrated as she hummed at your answer
  124. 124.
    >"Hmmm...come closer"
  125. 125.
    >Her hoof landed on the edge as she had done before
  126. 126.
    >And seeing it there sent shivers down your spine
  127. 127.
    >You get up on shaky legs and walked to the middle of the altar
  128. 128.
    >It was surprisingly clean, blood and cracked ground around, but the sacrifice area looking rather pristine
  129. 129.
    >Her head stopped lowering as the bottom of her snout reached the same height as your ground
  130. 130.
    >Yet it was twice or perhaps even three times as tall as you
  131. 131.
    >And with a frown, she slowly tapped the ground where the warrior last stood
  132. 132.
    >"No, here" - she said, the loud thuds of her gentle tapping not being enough to silence her deafening voice
  133. 133.
    >And with her mouth so close, you could feel the strong winds created by her simply speaking, almost sweeping you off your feet
  134. 134.
    >Gulping, you walked to where her hoof just had retreated from
  135. 135.
    >Closer to her face, you can't even fathom the size difference between the both of you
  136. 136.
    >"So, you want a chance huh?"
  137. 137.
    >Her mouth opened in a grin, each of her teeth being big enough to be a door
  138. 138.
    >You fell back on your butt, and the grin quickly turned into a pout
  139. 139.
    >Y-you went too far, you can't stop now
  140. 140.
    >"Here was I thinking you d be more courageous than that, fine"
  141. 141.
    >Her soft lower lips hit the edge and she opened her mouth wide in front of you
  142. 142.
    >Proceeding to move her massive tongue around in the air, she licked each of her teeth before closing it back down
  143. 143.
    >"Here s your challenge, if you walk into my mouth willingly I'll spare your home, how does that sound?"
  144. 144.
    >She opened her mouth wide once more
  145. 145.
    >Surely she knew you didn't need it to go that high, but the show of its size put her intended fear in you
  146. 146.
    >The last straw was seeing her tongue unroll forwards towards you, actually rolling over your bottom half before stopping
  147. 147.
    >You even dragged yourself back, but since you were sitting you didn't get far before your legs got trapped under its weight
  148. 148.
    >Unable to lift her tongue or drag yourself out, you look back at the warriors
  149. 149.
    >After all this time they hadn't moved at all, playing dead or simply too scared to move
  150. 150.
    >And too scared to help you out apparently
  151. 151.
    >No matter how you tried to pull yourself out, its huge weight held you in place
  152. 152.
    >It was malleable enough to not be uncomfortable, but it still felt heavy enough to crush you if she applied any pressure
  153. 153.
    >Finally giving up, you relented, staring at it and feeling powerless
  154. 154.
    >It wasn't long until it lazily lifted itself up, the mare apparently enjoying your struggles under it with her rosy cheeks
  155. 155.
    >Moving away from your previous spot, it descended once more to make a red-carpeted entry
  156. 156.
    >And having seen her blushing cheeks helped your resolve to go inside
  157. 157.
    >If you could get her to enjoy herself then perhaps you could in fact save everyone
  158. 158.
    >And so you stepped forward
  159. 159.
    >And immediately slipped
  160. 160.
    >Falling face first on her tongue was less painful than you expected
  161. 161.
    >It vibrating along with her throaty hums of approval screamed that she would pull you in any time now
  162. 162.
    >But true to her words, it went back to being still after a while
  163. 163.
    >Although there was now a lot of drooling in her mouth, slowly coming to you by her tongue
  164. 164.
    >So you decided to keep going on fours to not slip again
  165. 165.
    >And as soon you went past her teeth, her tongue receded
  166. 166.
    >You didn't knew how far inside you were, but it just kept going further and further back
  167. 167.
    >When you thought you were going to go straight into her throat it stopped, and you felt a great upwards force as her head rose again
  168. 168.
    >Closing her mouth she tilted her head forwards, making you slide towards her teeth
  169. 169.
    >At least you weren't going to fall from whatever height you were at now
  170. 170.
    >But before you hit them, she tilted her head sideways, sliding you underneath her tongue
  171. 171.
    >"My, my, you really did it. I didn't think you had it in you"
  172. 172.
    >Inside, her voice was so loud and encompassing you felt you d go deaf even with her whispering
  173. 173.
    >"Since you were a nice one I will leave you for last"
  174. 174.
    >Light shone in from the sides of her mouth as she grinned
  175. 175.
    >"But for your two, I only have one last thing to say..."
  176. 176.
    >"Run~"
  177. 177.
    >While you couldn't see outside, the screams still reached your ears
  178. 178.
    >The movement also implied that she had gotten up, starting to walk somewhere
  179. 179.
    >Before you could think too much about what was happening outside, her tongue decided to remind you about the inside
  180. 180.
    >It slid your body back on top of it, before throwing you around and pinning your body on various places in her mouth
  181. 181.
    >Not only was she playing with you inside, but she was also tracking something outside, as her head kept moving around
  182. 182.
    >Before long you were harshly pinned to the top, with a strong pressure following, with her sucking your form
  183. 183.
    >From outside, a massive boom rang out, similar to the first thunder from a sacrifice
  184. 184.
    >Releasing you, you were shot to her cheeks, as she moved her head sideways
  185. 185.
    >When it stopped, you were once more pinned to the underside of the tongue, as a massive g-force pulled you upwards
  186. 186.
    >She had jumped...
  187. 187.
    >The second thunder soon echoed, louder than the first and no doubt crashing many houses with the following earthquake
  188. 188.
    >The ritual was complete
  189. 189.
     
  190. 190.
    >But you were alive...
  191. 191.
    >Rhythmic thuds came from outside as she started walking somewhere
  192. 192.
    >You d think she had forgotten about you, but her tongue pulling you back on top of it said otherwise
  193. 193.
    >You felt gravity shift as she opened her mouth, seeing now that she was walking opposite direction than the village
  194. 194.
    >What worried you is that she kept tilting her head more and more...
  195. 195.
    >She was dropping you off from the skies
  196. 196.
    >You wouldn't even be allowed to die an honoured death by her actions
  197. 197.
    >But as soon you fell off, you saw one of her hooves line with your fall
  198. 198.
    >Falling on the soft frog, you didn't even feel the impact, the winds blasting you with the speed of her walk
  199. 199.
    >You couldn't even get off the leg, as the other three legs extended far down below kept walking forwards
  200. 200.
    >"Am I a bad pony?"
  201. 201.
    >That question took you by surprise, and all you could do was stare at her head, way up in the sky
  202. 202.
    >Receiving no answer, she stared at you, her sad eyes seeking comfort from the one she had just taken off from her mouth
  203. 203.
    >Not able to stare at you, she looked back ahead
  204. 204.
    >"Everytime I come to talk, I end up killing and crushing you guys like a monster, I...it feels so good but..."
  205. 205.
    >She kept walking a while more with both of you in silence
  206. 206.
    >After getting to a clearing she sat down and tilted her hoof, prompting you to climb down
  207. 207.
    >It was still quite the fall, but nothing too bad
  208. 208.
    >Turning back to her, not being up in the temple anymore, you could see how big the mare really was compared to you
  209. 209.
    >Her bottom was about as wide as the temple, but she was easily twice its size
  210. 210.
    >"Am I a bad pony?" - she asked again
  211. 211.
    "N-no of course not"
  212. 212.
    >"I know you're scared, but please don't lie to me" - she said sadly
  213. 213.
    >"I just walk there like the place was mine, kill some of you for my own enjoyment and then walk out like nothing happened...I'm a monster"
  214. 214.
    >She laid down in front of you, her belly right ahead of you and her head far to your left but turned to stare at you closer
  215. 215.
    >Her sad eyes were all you needed to see to know she indeed felt bad for it
  216. 216.
    "No you aren't, if you were you d go for the city and destroy everything there, surely that would beat killing three tiny humans...or four"
  217. 217.
    >"Well yea" - she said biting her lip, a fierce blush appearing on her cheeks before she shook her head
  218. 218.
    >"No, that s just bad, destroying everything for my enjoyment, I couldn't..."
  219. 219.
    >"Maybe i could actually" - she whispered the end, loud and clear as always
  220. 220.
    "And that s why we have the peace treaty, you can have your fun, we can have our lives, everyone wins"
  221. 221.
    >You don't know when you had gotten so bold, but before you noticed you had already walked to her belly
  222. 222.
    >To think you could be inside there right now makes you shudder again
  223. 223.
    >But something drives you to pet and rub the fur on wherever you can reach along with her
  224. 224.
    >She looks at you, surprised at your actions, letting out a giggle
  225. 225.
    >"You know, it was never supposed to be a peace treaty"
  226. 226.
    "Huh?"
  227. 227.
    >"It was an accident, they were building something there, I was walking past with this silly costume and saw it"
  228. 228.
    >"Then I went to look closer, and before I knew it, I had stepped on one of the construction workers and its carriage"
  229. 229.
    >She looked at her hoof as if reliving the memory
  230. 230.
    >"In the panic I ended crushing many others who were running around, trying to stop them"
  231. 231.
    >"And while I wasn't this big before, you guys were always really small and I had no idea how fragile you all really were"
  232. 232.
    >"In the end I almost let myself get carried away, I always loved the feel of power from things under my hoof but..."
  233. 233.
    >You notice her hoof coming after you and stop rubbing her belly, fear taking over for what she has in mind
  234. 234.
    >"Sorry I'm blabbing, but then I saw the little houses and the panic on everyone's eyes and left"
  235. 235.
    >She pressed you on her belly and slowly brought you upwards to her chest
  236. 236.
    >"I ve came back everytime I have to pass by there, and you guys always send a few people for me, so I thought..."
  237. 237.
    >You stopped at her forest of chest fluff, as she took a deep sigh
  238. 238.
    >"I really am a monster, aren't I?"
  239. 239.
    >You don't know why but you felt safe here with this mare
  240. 240.
    >No need to worry about her rampaging and killing everyone
  241. 241.
    >Just a lone girl in need of someone to talk to
  242. 242.
    >A really big girl but still
  243. 243.
    >You almost felt safe enough to crack a joke
  244. 244.
    >Almost
  245. 245.
    >I-is this the power of fluff?
  246. 246.
    >Ah fuck it, let's do it
  247. 247.
    "Well, tell me who told you that so I can kick their butt"
  248. 248.
    >She didn't even pause to answer or think
  249. 249.
    >"I said it myself so"
  250. 250.
    >Taking the pressure away from her hoof, you feel yourself being taken away from the fluff
  251. 251.
    >And with a flick of her leg you're sent flying through the sky
  252. 252.
    >You close your eyes, not willing to see your doom
  253. 253.
    >But when you land you bounce into something soft twice, before sliding into the tall grass where you slowed down to a stop
  254. 254.
    >Which is actually yellow fur with a massive picture of-
  255. 255.
    >"So what were you going to do again?"
  256. 256.
    "I-it was a joke, please have-"
  257. 257.
    >"Drop that goddess act, are you guys serious with that?"
  258. 258.
    >She starts to move to get into a more comfortable position, taking off the headdress
  259. 259.
    >"Look at me, I'm a simple mare, I never thought you guys-"
  260. 260.
    >With her loud sigh you can almost feel her frustration
  261. 261.
    >"Just kick it, show me how much of a bad mare I have been. I deserve that"
  262. 262.
    >You look at the massive globe you're laying in and wonder if she d even feel it
  263. 263.
    >Getting up, you stomp the ground once
  264. 264.
    >But looking above to the skies it got no reaction from her, still staring at you like before
  265. 265.
    >So you stomp as hard as you can
  266. 266.
    >But its softness spreads the impact everywhere and into your anchored feet, making you lose your balance and fall down
  267. 267.
    >The mare giggles at that at least, so hopefully she isn't feeling so bad
  268. 268.
    >"Don't know how you guys call me, but I'm Sequoia"
  269. 269.
    "I'm Anon, pleased to...meet you"
  270. 270.
    >She giggles at that, repeatedly tensing and softening her butt, moving you along with it
  271. 271.
    >"You're cute, hope you don't mind staying with me. I'm not sure how they d react with you going back"
  272. 272.
    "I'd be killed if I went back, so it's fine"
  273. 273.
    >With a gasp, her hooves shoot to cover her muzzle
  274. 274.
    >"Killed? Can I have the honours?"
  275. 275.
    "What do you- please no!"
  276. 276.
    >"Kidding, kidding...or am I?"
  277. 277.
    >You punched her fat flanks as she giggled, knowing she d be fine with it
  278. 278.
    >That was the start of a long friendship...

Unicorn hunting (revised)

by BtMess

[MMP] Dragonshy side story: The Pies

by BtMess

[MMP] Marco Polo!

by BtMess

Food problems

by BtMess

[MMP] Twilight's Break

by BtMess