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Bailee's Punch [Part 1]

By Scootanon
Created: 2026-06-23 10:01:23
Updated: 2026-06-23 10:08:35
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    As Seen Pony Transformation General /ptfg/: >>43308018
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    https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/43302715/pony-transformation-general#p43308018
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    2026-06-19
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    by Scootanon (me)
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    >be you
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    >F 22
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    >taking awhile with college
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    >Not really sure if this degree is even going to be worth it.
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    >Grew up with FiM; you and your sister (Kelly, 24) started watching in 2010.
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    >You both slowly got more involved with the fandom as you became teens.
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    >All the girls around campus have long forgotten about the show now, though; to them it’s just a childhood memory.
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    >The guys are more aware of the continued existence of the fandom, but they all don’t care.
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    >Except for three.
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    >Somehow, you and Kelly found Matt, Ryan, and Jacob; possibly the only three other true pony fans on campus.
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    >The five of you are an unofficial little campus pony club.
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    >Often, you all talk about how – if one of you found a portal to Equestria – you’d all go together, so nopony would be alone.
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    >Kelly’s really into the whole idea of both Equestria and being a pony, Ryan and Matt mainly want to go to Equestria for better opportunities, and Jacob...well, he really only agreed to go out of solidarity – IF his girlfriend Natalia will go too.
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    >You, meanwhile, don’t care as much about Equestria itself, but the idea of being a pony...
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    >The idea of having an adorably cute face; soft, cozy fur; the perfect blend of feline agility and equine majesty; tasting all the flowers you could ever want…
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    >You and Kelly sometimes randomly roleplay being ponies when you’re both alone in your apartment together. Walking on all fours, picking up items with your mouth, talking about Ponyville news, etc.
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    >Some nights, your sole thought process as you drift to sleep will just be envisioning yourself as a pony (on Earth or Equestria), eliciting some tired little giggles as the thought fades into your dreams.
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    >be you
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    >President’s Day
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    >or “Princesses’ Day” in your pony club, often involving a series rewatch, and a hot debate over best princess.
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    >You know it’s Luna – obviously – but every year nobody stops being objectively wrong with their choice.
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    >Well, whatever, it’s a fun hang-out between you five (and Jacob’s girlfriend today) none the less.
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    >Hit end of Season 4.
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    >While on intermission, Kelly announces that she’s got a surprise: a keg of special fruit punch!
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    >If there’s one thing you like as much as pony, it’s fruit punch. Especially grape.
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    >Kelly seems unusually excited about this though, especially since she says the punch itself isn’t the whole surprise.
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    >She dumps the keg into a bowl, and then pours each of you some in a glass.
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    >You all toast to pony, and down the punch.
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    >You can tell by taste that it’s alcoholic, but it’s also...carbonated? It’s definitely very fizzy. A soft, floaty fizz.
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    >It also tastes great. It’s grape, so that’s immediately a plus for you, but it also tastes sweet and savory. Almost like what you’d expect joy to taste like.
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    >”You like it, Bailee?” Kelly asks eagerly.
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    >You nod rapidly and take another gulp.
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    “This is great! It’s like I’m drinking sunshine!”
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    >”It’s shine alright!” Ryan laughs. “Where did you even get this?”
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    >”Guy out on The Park was selling kegs of it,” Kelly replies. “Had a whole bunch of flavors. Picked up grape ‘cause I knew Bailee likes it.”
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    >Matt holds his glass up. “Well hey, I’m down for another round.”
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    >You quickly gulp down the rest of your drink and hold out your glass.
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    “Me too!”
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    >Kelly smiles playfully and pours you all some more.
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    >As you slurp down the next cup, that’s when you begin to notice a floaty tingle – almost like the carbonation in the punch itself – start to make waves through your body.
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    >Your head gets a little dizzy, and the world starts to get a micro-delay.
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    >A buzz already? That was fast.
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    >You look down at the punch glass, wondering if you should hold off on taking another gulp.
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    >You also suddenly wonder where and when you got such bright purple nail paint.
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    >Painting nails hasn’t been much of your thing, but you at least would’ve remembered putting this on in...the last five minutes!?
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    >You check your other hand.
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    >It’s there too.
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    “What the-…?”
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    >“Something wrong?” Ryan asks.
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    >You tilt your head to the side, still staring at your hand.
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    “Yeah...I...when did I paint my nails?”
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    >”Wait what the hell!? Mine are painted too!” he exclaims.
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    >You scratch your ear a bit.
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    >”Oh shit! Mine are yellow!” Matt says, looking over his own.
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    >Natalia squints at her fancy manicure. “I...can’t see under my actual paint,” she says.
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    >”What kind of punch *is* this!?” Jacob asks, a little panicked.
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    >Kelly giggles “Oh you’ll see!”
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    >Her fingernails seem to be a hot pink.
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    >Also, is her *nose* pink too? ...Also, your ears are *really* itchy, it seems.
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    >”Oh my gosh, Ryan, your ears!” Natalia exclaims, pointing to- WHY ARE THEY TURNING PURPLE AND POINTY!?
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    >You feel up to your ears.
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    >*They’re even more pointy.*
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    >You get butterflies in your stomach, on top of feeling floaty from the buzz.
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    “Natalia, quick! Gimme a mirror!” you yelp in panic, before setting the punch glass down to scratching some nasty itching on your nose and face.
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    >She looks your way and jumps slightly. “BAILEE! YOU LOOK-”
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    “THE MIRROR!” you shout.
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    >Natalia rapidly digs through her purse and tosses you her makeup mirror.
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    >You fumble to open it, your fingers feeling unusually non-articulate, even for being buzzed.
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    >Popping it open, you find your reflection and stare wide-eyed.
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    >Purple fur is all over your nose, looking like it’s ready to spread across your face.
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    “WHAAaaaaa!?” you exclaim, your jaw dropping.
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    >Kelly just giggles. “You like it, Bailee?” She giggles some more.
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    >You look up at her and just blink, jaw still wide open.
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    >Kelly’s face is half-covered in hot pink fuzz, and it’s starting to warp. Her nose is wider, and it, plus her mouth, are starting to stretch forwards.
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    >Almost like a…
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    >”No way,” Ryan remarks, staring up at Kelly.
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    >”Who was selling *this*!?” Jacob asks.
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    >Kelly shrugs. “Like I said, some guy on The Park. There was a mare with him, so that’s how I knew it even worked.”
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    >”How long does this last?” Matt asks, now starting to get some light yellow fur on his face & ears, too.
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    >”Dunno!” Kelly replies. “Can’t imagine it’s forever. But if it is, we’re all in this together!”
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    >Ryan shrugs and holds out his glass. “Dab me up some more, then.”
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    >”Me too!” Natalia says, much to Jacob’s surprise.
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    >You look back at yourself in the mirror. You’re starting to get the muzzle very slightly, but the changes seem to have slowed a little.
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    >You glance down at the punch and shrug; might as well give in.
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    >Down the hatch it goes!
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    >Still that fizzy grape sunshine taste.
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    >You quickly dunk the glass in the punch bowl and gulp down another.
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    >The floaty, tingly, dizzy feeling washes over you again.
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    “Wooo...” you giggle.
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    >Some of your muscles twitch and spasm a little as you feel like your face is being stretched like clay.
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    >Your little purple muzzle comes into the bottom of your view more prominently.
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    >Your limbs are also shifting a bit, shins shortening as your feet stretch out, all while your thighs shorten a little into a fatter barrel.
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    >Whatever magic this is, is sculpting you from the inside, and it honestly feels kinda exhilarating.
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    >”This is *sooo* cute!” Natalia says, looking at the reflection of her own proto-muzzle in her phone screen.
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    >She seems to be getting a brown coat, just a little darker than your sandy-brown hair.
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    >Wait, is your hair even still sandy-brown?
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    >You set the punch glass down (it was getting hard to hold with your thickening fingers anyway), and quickly look in the makeup mirror again.
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    >Your face has almost totally ponified, and your ears are almost to the top of your head. Your hair, meanwhile, is starting to get streaks of a darker purple in it.
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    >It kind of makes you think of-
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    “Berry Punch!?” you giggle. “It’s turning me into Berry Punch!?”
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    >You snicker a bit before rolling backward in a laughing fit.
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    >”Guess it knows there’s no better pony for you, Ms. Grape Juice Lover!” Kelly taunts, giggling.
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    >She leans, and suddenly loses balance.
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    >”W-Woah!” she yelps, flailing her arm-forelegs cartoonishly, before falling backward on her rump.
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    >You just laugh all the more.
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    “So much for being a pilot! You can’t even STAND anymore!”
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    >You continue to laugh like a schoolgirl.
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    >Kelly gives a half “hrmph”, half snort-out.
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    >”Dawww, you made a little horsie noise!” Natalia exclaims.
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    >Kelly’s cheeks flush red.
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    >”We’re not gonna start neighing...right?” Jacob asks. He seems to be getting a sand-colored coat. It’s definitely coming in slowest of everyone.
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    >”Would we even notice?” Matt asks.
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    >”Yeah, I mean we’d all be speaking horse, so what difference does it make?” Ryan remarks. He seems to be turning into a purple stallion; there’s a couple faint glimmers of aqua in his hair, too.
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    >”Well what about the outside world?” Jacob adds. “How are we gonna communicate with anyone else.”
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    >”Relax,” Kelly says, shuffling on her back. “The mare at the table spoke English. ...Also, *rngh*, these pants…”
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    >Kelly is fighting and kicking her now ill-fitting long pants, trying to get them off.
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    >That’s when you notice that her hair is getting some bright yellow streaks in it.
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    >You tilt your head to the side, pursing your lips and squinting. You can’t quite think of what pony that would be…
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    >”More punch, please,” Matt says, holding over his glass. At least he still has fingers.
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    >”Same here!” Ryan adds.
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    >You awkwardly grab the ladle with your mouth and – making a light mess – pour them fresh glasses.
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    >”Thanks, *Berry-lee*,” Matt says, smirking.
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    “Har-har!” you say back, giggling.
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    >You glance back down to your punch glass. Seeing that it’s both empty and too hard to grab, you simply reach up to the punchbowl, tip it, and slowly sip more out of it, letting the fizzy coolness flow all throughout your veins.
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    >”Hey, leave some for the rest of us!” Ryan calls out.
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    >You look back.
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    “Sorry! Just excited!”
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    >You look back to a more yellow-maned Kelly, who’s carefully trying to hold her punch glass with her hooves as she takes a gulp.
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    >Suddenly, your eyes go wide.
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    “CHERRY BERRY!” you shout, pointing a hoof-hand.
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    >Kelly jumps slightly, loosing hold of her glass as it tumbles to the carpet.
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    >”Bailee!”
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    “You’re turning into Cherry Berry! We’re even sisters as ponies!”
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    >Kelly looks over at a mirror on the wall. Her eyes widen as she runs a hoof through her mane.
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    >“Hey Berry, nice tail by the way,” Ryan says.
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    >You look back, and then down to notice a tail poking out from over the elastic waistband of your shorts.
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    “Oooh, fluffy...” you say, mesmerized.
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    >Quickly, you take another gulp of punch, some of it running down your chin, before slumping back to your seat on the floor.
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    >The rush is making you feel kind of like you’re sitting on a boat on the waves.
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    >Your hands are really hoof-like now, and there’s fur over half your ponified legs.
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    >Glancing down at the makeup mirror sitting on the floor, you can see your soft blue eyes beginning to change to a vibrant, dark magenta.
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    >You lick some of the excess punch off your lips, and sit back, trying to wipe the rest off your muzzle with your wrist.
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    >”Enjoying it?” Natalia asks, giving an almost “yeah, I already know you are” look.
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    “Mm-hmm!” you nod.
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    >She’s managed to clutch the bottom of her punch glass with what half-hand she has left.
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    >Ultimately though, she’s not as far along as you, Kelly, or Ryan; she’s only about half-covered in fur, and her hair change has only started. This basically confirms that consumption rate affects the speed.
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    >She is, however, already on all-fours, despite still having use of her semi-hands, and she already has a fully-formed tail.
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    >Consumption rate must also affect order of operations, then. Weird.
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    (To be potentially continued...)
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    [43308018]
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    >>43303550
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    I don't usually write greens, but this one left me feeling unusually inspired.
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    It's not 100% accurate to the image, but I tried to give a somewhat similar setup.
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    I also tried to include >>43306929 as well, since you posted it.
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    Was originally gonna be short, but it turned out way longer than I intended.
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    (Which I feel bad for, since I myself tend not to read long greens.)
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    ~~~
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    [43308038]
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    Was gonna have things get further, but the pace of the actual story ended up longer/slower than I was thinking.
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    I also initially planned on them ending up in Equestria (via a TV portal), but IDK if that's the direction I want to take things, if I even finish this.
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    Maybe it should be temporary, maybe it shouldn't.
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    Main reason I second-guessed the portal-to-Equestria is because of the mare Kelly saw on The Park. If you're automatically portal'd to Equestria, then why was that mare still around?
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    Also, FYI since they were slower and less obvious: Matt is Golden Grape, Ryan is Grape Candy, and Jacob is Cherry Fizz (probably with blue eyes and a slightly redder coat, so he's not just an alt-CM Golden Delicious).
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    [43312005]
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    >>43311732
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    >Ryan/Grape Candy is a REALLY deep pull – I didn’t remember that character in the slightest lol.
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    Yeah, I spent awhile searching through pics of background stallions to find one that felt "right", while also hoping it'd be a fruit-related pony. Grape Candy fit the bill well enough for me.
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    Part of the issue is that so many background earth pony stallions seen in Ponyville are actually Apple Family adjacent, and I just didn't feel like this was the right mini-story to feature them. Still not 100% satisfied with picking Cherry Fizz, since he's just Golden Delicious with a different CM, but my options were getting limited for what felt right, and the cherry was fruit related.
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    Still not sure on the lore of the green, since I kind of just threw it together with what seemed silly/fun.
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    Mainly I'm undecided on whether it should be significant that (at least) sisters Kelly & Bailee got turned into canon character sisters who are also a pilot & drink enthusiast, respectively. (And although it's not mentioned, it's the same birth order, too.)
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    If I continue, it's either going to have to be a coincidence, or an important plot detail that says something about the nature of both the spell/potion and the characters.
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    [43313277]
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    >>43313241
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    >Was it intentional that the punch turned everyone into an earth pony, or is that a side effect of the transformees all being ponies with fruit cutie marks (with the exception of Mjolna)?
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    From a writing perspective, it's half intentional, half a side effect.
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    Side effect because fruit ones are generally earthies.
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    Intentional because, statistically speaking, you're most likely to be an earth pony.
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    So everyone here just happened to roll earth.
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    (Or maybe they already were earthies in some way; haven't decided on the lore yet.)
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    [43313848]
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    >Have you got a paste for this?
  201. 201.
    Do now.

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